Your body struggles to move
Screaming for a release
Open your mouth and your soul exits into the wastebasket
Consciousness grasps you for only moments
You cry out
In pain, in suffering
You'll never survive this
Death's pale hand reaches toward you
Threatening to snip the thread of life
It's hard fingers scraping the edges of your throat
Hungering for your essence
Succumb to the darkness once again
Praying to see the light of day just once more
Author notes
This is about one of the scariest experiences of my life.
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Comments
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Wow reading each word i felt emotional investment in every single of them and i felt like i was there. I'm sorry for whatever happened becuz reading this it sounds horrible. -cyber hug- Your words choice and flow was wonderful in this piece and i especially liked the line "Open your mouth and your soul exits into the wastebasket"
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very good writing here...I like the fact that you don't actually reveal exactly what it is that has put you in this place...I can imagine several different scenerios...
thank you for sharing. I can only imagine that this event was life changing for you...
peace and light,
kendal
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Written good, a little scary it is, thank you so much for your entry!
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