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Journey

Confused!
Seduced!
Abused!
Reduced!
Now,
saw
bright
light
calling,
balling
against
rest;
tears,
fears
all out
victory
tree
no doubt!

Author notes

Its about new found destiny after long struggles.

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  • smitaanand
    October 14

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    The poem is sweet but try to write longer lines this gives a message but the lines are stilted please try to inculcate more flow in your verse.Just adding my two bit take it where you will...