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We learn to breathe again

As the cold of the night comes to an end
And the leaves begin to grow again
We finally heal
And breathe again
The seasons change
That's when we finally see the light
And believe in something more
And it's when we realise
That it's not the end of the world
Just the end of this chapter we call life

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  • JToddUnderhill
    November 3

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    Deep....

    .... but so meaningful you are wise beyond your years and I ma glad I stopped in to read this one. Favorite lines "That it's not the end of the world, Just the end of this chapter we call life." this means I am not the only one to think this way and that make me feel OK


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 13
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    Very nice. I love the positve feeling this gives me.
    Keep on sweet one, keep on.

    Joe


  • Jacob S. Steadman
    October 12
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    nice, thoughtful one here i think. Not too heavy tho which is good. Keep em comin' i love your stuff. J.