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More

I am

More

than the sway of my hips
or the curve of my breast
or the blush on my cheek

I am

More

than the length of my hair
or the style of my shoes
or the fit of my jeans

I am

More

than what you give me credit for...


I am dreams.
I am actuality.
I am action-
and reaction...
in all its various forms.

I am the songs that I sing
and the poetry that I write.
I am the love that I show
and the tears that I cry.

I am laughter.
I am the ticking of time.
I am the keeper of memories
and the knowledge of
My life.

And it has been a good one.

I am

More

than my shell.

I am

More

than the eye beholds.

I am

More.

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Comments

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  • Virulent Malice
    November 9

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    An effective list poem, they're not an easy form to pull off without being tedious. You did well here.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    November 9

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    This just about made me cry. I love this. So true and powerful. Thanks so much for sharing!

    x

  • abu nuwas
    November 9
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    So that's it! Well, dang me!


  • dabble duck
    October 11

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    What a fantastic outlook this poem leaves one with!


  • Scarlet x Stone
    October 11

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    Hey, you certainlty filled me with hope and inspiration. It was a beautiful and easy poem to read, very emotional too. xxx

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