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!CrUsHeD!

the sky dims as the stars brighten

my heart sinks but im still fighting

my life twirls like a disco ball only without the sparkle

my head is so full it feels like its about to burst

i have noone to talk to nowhere to go even at my own home

i hear shouts and screams which hurt me deeply

i tryt to cover up the wound but it will not heal

but dos not show to untrained eye

these wounds they dig deeper and deeper

i have noone to tell  and noone will listen

my little black box its filled with hate

as i dream its gets smaller and smaller

i feel smothered in it i cannot breathe theres noone else here- its pitch black,no light

so i swith the light on and walk away

but that box just gets smaller and smaller until one day we'll die together!!!

Author notes

i stopped writing along time but im back now my feelings have built up to much but now im here to express them through poetry //
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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 11

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    excellent

    You express your feelings well in your poems. That's a fine gift for anybody to have. This poem is a good example. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian