Insanity’s Embrace
I demonstrated new tactics that can never be imitated or duplicated, however you want to call it, you will still be eliminated
I feel regenerated
I contemplated all the ones who player hated
Complicated every matter I face for the ones that never waited
Left me feeling irritated, constipated, aggravated, devastated and frustrated
You better recognize I’ve dedicated and elevated myself to terminate any parasite that’s been left vacated
I’m past the condition they call critical
Yes I’m taking shots to all who thought I was pitiful
“LOOK AT YOU!” was a constant ridicule
With aerial somersaults of an all out verbal onslaught
I treat each and every one of you as a criminal
I’m Dr. cynical with a game called “Tick-Tock
I watch as I gotten rid of you
I haven’t even reached my pinnacle
My equilibrium have been broken, I have to find the missing interval
From the drips off the needle of epinephrine
I have a mental relapse on life that made me miserable
Nevertheless my heart’s pumping two hundred beats per minute and my outer being stay’s calm in general
I feed intravenously to keep up my intoxicating minerals
I’m a broken meter that’s never been calibrated
Why was I made to walk into a land of tyrants, if my soul been excavated?
Every time I close my eyes, I experience the life of vertigo
This feeling of a new high, have my mind in an inferno
With liquid cocaine, I inject in two veins
A mixture of morphine and vicoDANE
I’m starting to slur my words, it’s just absurd that my skin feels like it is been set a blazed
I nurse no pain, I sniff propane
I have no limit and I’m starting to lose focus on how to stay sane
I’m so problematic and overly too dramatic
I’m walking hybrid of Zoloft and Xanax
My body stays on automatic
Diagnosed as a manic an anti-depressant addict
Therapy for who? I drove my doctor to see a psychologist
I’m in love with vanity
In the mirror I’m screaming at you, I Embrace my Insanity
I have many names and different forms of personality
It’s not a disorder, I’m very organize, just ask my revolver
It’s just a simple formality
An alternate reality, where illusions becomes real and I start to kill for only anxiety
By the way who are you that is standing beside me?
Why you keep calling me, stalking me, robbing me by committing mental sodomy?
You bother me, I CAN’T STOP TALKING TO ME!!!!!
I cut myself to find out I just found a new side of me
Ecstasy and pain
Fantasy and vain
I think I said vanity
I’m rambling and rambling and rambling
A new life in the asylum embracing my insanity
I keep repeating myself… “Hi bob and Joe and Becky”
My new walls are mad at me
WHY!! WHY ARE YOU ALL MAD AT ME!!!!
I start yelling until I feel an injection
AHHHHHhhhhhhh……. OOOOOOoooooohhhhh……. YESSSSssss……
I forgot about the joy of the needle
Ironically I fall into a comatose state, all from an overdose because of careless people
And they got the nerve to say I’m twisted mentally!
People these days...
Author notes
i was bored at work when i wrote this plus, i was listening to the Twista's new song called "misunderstood". i love the beat. so iwrote this with the beat in my head. but it's not meant to be read fast. just a thought. i haven't wrote something wild and out there in a long time. but this can be contrued as a real life example. so enjoy
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Ecstasy and pain
Fantasy and vain
I think I said vanity
I’m rambling and rambling and rambling
I love this part. Fantastic write. thank you for entering. -
exquisitely written
nothing misunderstand with this piece.....i like its simplicity as well as its complexity within and of itself.......its a masterpiece to me awaiting its rightful reward.......loved it.......kudos........love peace & harmony
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WOW ! thats insane . lol . it almost told a story kind of . is this true ? if so , ican relate soo well !
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I would absolutely love to hear this set to music. You have a way with words and this is awesome. You did great with this. Thanks for sharing this and keep up the great writing. (See, some good does come from boredom!)
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I definitely enjoyed reading this. The rhyming was great and the first stanza really was my favorite in rhymes and all very unique. Great write and I think I will definitely check out a few more of your poems.
Sidenote: "I’m very organize" This line would probably work better if you change organize to organized.
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I can deffinately say this poem had a lot of power. Strong point, too. The rhyming was a lot better than those "Rain and pain" you find so often.
Over all, very well done.
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Wow! Is all I can really say here. Very powerful in many ways. Very well done.
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Lyricist, this piece is sick kid. I mean, mental illness type madness flowing here...hahaha. I love the crazy twists and turns here; the craziness worked perfectly. Pure insanity - INSTANTLY!!! LOL. Great job with this piece. Keep them coming.
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WOWWW this is a powerful piece. The rhyme is a fast pace and you could here it as if it was on the radio. Great word usage too. The emotion was high as I read it. I could feel its anger." Excellent job on this "
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I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm in this and it made such perfect sense. It was definitely insanity defined.
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excellent excellent excellennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnt
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I agree with Blueyez - awesome write, but man, I want to HEAR it. I read it out loud, but it wasn't the same.... I'm glad you posted this. Different from what I usually read, on a day I seriously needed different.
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I think this would be amazing to hear you spit...
Nevertheless my heart’s pumping two hundred beats per minute and my outer being stay’s calm in general
that's a good quality to have! To be able to stay calm on the outside... wear that poker face well!
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DAMMMMMMMN!!
Yo kid, this blazing hot..i burnt my damn brain reading this! l.o.l. for real my man, you set it off..i'm so proud of you crazy..mad, sick flow..wicked lines too many to luist..hell i'd have to put the piece in the comment box! l.o.l. this is a top fav!!
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