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The Sea

Written 03.09.09

The sea, the sea.
It rolls and rolls
and calls for me!
The sea, the sea.
I follow the sounds
of those splashing waves,
and still it calls,
the sea, the sea.
I step into the water,
I swim and swim,
but out it pulls me
once again.
But still it calls,
the sea, the sea.
It rolls and rolls
and still it calls!
The sea, the sea!

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