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Drive By the Crease

I drove past the park today and
 wondered if love is a time share.

How many times I'd wish for spoilage
 in the back seat, a wasted money-escape
  for frozen foods to decompose
   while we walked on asphalt ... or
    a dirt trail pelleted by limestone
     where kids could roam
       in total adult obscurity,

        oblivious to the laws of the sciences
         except for, perhaps, Chemistry.


The reds, yellows, and oranges
 will wave us by, pine needles
  embrace the footpath muddied
    year over year by biped
     and quadruped prints alike ...

     seeking whatever within
       a leaf-thick protection,

        our canopy.

                   ***

I waddled past fresh green eyes today and
 wondered if love would ever come ...

  if lust were only a physical excuse
   to be close without relational ties ...

     and how easy the destruction
      if love is when you are both
       at your strongest and weakest in life.


No, I don't think I will survive love.

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 7
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    Sure you will. We all do, and we even learn from what makes us trip ourselves up.
    where am I now on this strongest to weakest spectrum, I wonder? do we have to be one or the other, and can it change from day to day? Most sane people I know say no, it's a long and treacherous journey to nowhere really. I dont know. Love? hmm...I have opposing definitions of what many consider to be love, and usually Im told to keep my thoughts to myself. Either way, this write makes me ache.
    love,
    jin


    • Solo Wisp gold member
      November 7

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      I'd rather you express your thoughts of love rather than be silenced any day. There are differing degrees of love- a spectrum of pink, at least that is the conclusion I gather.


      • JinSays gold member
        November 7

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        but what if I'm feeling rather bluish-purple? spectrums of pink scare me.


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    October 15
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    Holy crap.