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My Guardian Angel

Written 10.04.09

My guardian angel,
how I miss him so.
I miss his arms around me,
and now my life is cold.
My guardian angel,
I miss his smiling eyes.
I remember when they disappeared,
and when he finally cried.
I remember the angel's final words,
and his final gaze.
I left him in the sea,
and again, I'm in this maze.
I remember when the angel
told me a sad tale
of the life he had lived
and the dreams that had failed.
My guardian angel,
I remember his sad end.
I am sorry for leaving,
and I miss him, my friend.

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