Written 10.09.09
I've written my name all over this town,
watched this sun go up and down,
ran across these fields so green.
You won't forget me.
You won't forget me.
I've marked every single piece of grass,
watched these clouds roll before they pass,
left everywhere a part of me.
You won't forget me.
You won't forget me.
I've known every bird to soar these skies,
made myself believe that I could fly,
shouted goodbye to everyone I see.
You won't forget me.
You won't forget me.
I'll be leaving this town so very soon,
traveling under light of the stars and moon.
Won't be long till my world's what I want it to be.
You won't forget me.
You won't forget me.
A contest entry
- A Little Motivation by WuzGood.
1500 points, ended October 20, 33 entries
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wow, nice length and rhythm.
not sure i'm in love with how you ended every stanza that way, but i know i will want to read this again, so i am book marking it. hope this gets gold! -
Great
I like the form in this peace, the flow was great, I enjoyed reading this write, thanks and good luck in the contest.
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