I think of how I used to feel
and how we would kiss
I can't help but feel unreal
and it's you I really miss.
I think back to how
it all used to be
The dreams coming true
and my true destiny.
The times were hard
but we made due
I can't help but feel lost
'cause anymore I haven't a clue.
The way you used to smell
the perfume you would wear
I still sometimes cry at night
wishing you were near.
It's like I'm living
without any air
I've not got a meaning
when you can't be here.
The heart that's in my chest
still has so much love that's true
I know not a day goes by
it's true I'm missing you.
Author notes
This is a poem I wrote with the title that my friend Adam gave me. I hope I gave the title justice.
Please don't critique this.
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it made me cry
this poem is wounderfull! this is what i thank about every since my ex bf killed himself.. the way he use to smell, wishing he was near! this poem has my emotions written all over it! good job
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very good. I love the emotions u put into it. Keep up the great work
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very emtional piece here. i know i felt this way before. excellent write
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"I think of how I used to feel
and how we would kiss
I can't help but feel unreal
and it's you I really miss." Loved it. Great job on this poem my friend. Keep on writing and I will keep reading
-Steve-
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Nicely written........
Bravo the poem was flowing like a stream without any stop's.Like a road without any road-block's. Very good may I say again.
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Absolutely Beautiful............
I really love this write, the emotion, the way you expressed just how you felt. Exposing yourself without bounderies. Absolutely wonderfully and beautifully done. Muchas Gracias!
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very emotional, and very deep. i liked the last line.. 'it's true im missing you.' just kinda stuck with me
great write
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this is reallly good, it has alot of emotion in it
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