Touching you in a way that makes you swoon
You allow yourself to fall into me
This begins moments of intimacy
That we play out with our without a moon.
In clutching we find morning comes too soon
Never the less you were a fine destiny
and I drown in your sensuality
I am love struck and crazy as a loon.
What a sensation your skin touching mine
I am your satiated attendant.
My fingers glide your contours to define.
Every inch of you purely resplendent.
I give in to loves plan and your design
Doing such I feel myself transcendent
Author notes
Spanish Sonnet. Very simple rhyme sheme of abba abba cd cd cd usually five beats or ten syllables for thus of us who have no rhythm.
I like the simplicity of the form.
In a list
A contest entry
- Form Poetry --- II by rinzurajan.
700 points, ended November 1, 56 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OH MY...!!!I WAS LEFT DUMBSTRUCK...NEVER KNEW THAT A SPANISH SONNET EXISTED...
THANKS FOR TEACHING ME THIS FORM...
GOOD LUCK


