Man ... Auto-mated!
Ram a bearing,
Drop a valve.
Slam a piston,
Blow a gasket!
Take heed my mate. You're the one to whom God
has given the spark of life!
Take care how you ignate the dormant seed
in the mystic recesses of the female heave.
Naka Pillman
What hand has bruised the tender cheek?
Did she turn witch, and he devil's freak?
Where is the dream to be lovers forever?
Body sent up and the soul goes nether ...
In a list
A contest entry
- Bruised - Picture Prompt by TerriMac.
1000 points, ended October 13, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very funny Naka. You still have quite a bit of spirit in you..
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Mechanical Verbage
Once thought to be manly thing ...
Registered here as a childish, sadistic tearing
Of Butterfly wings and burning Ants with a match.
The War of the sexes has to end once & for all.
( including the devious disrespect of the feminine 'Pushing of Buttons, starting something just to see how far it can go.)
"Tell Naka, I love her." lol
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Well, she & she love you too.
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The quote adds quite a bit to your poem. Your four lines have a lot to say. Very nicely expressed, especially the last line! Very nicely written!
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what a sad pic and thoughts you have penned , your words are powerful and fit the prompt to a T, best of luck in the contest
Sean
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For some reason the system deleted the quote that I posted. Please read again to get the full picture.
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the quote made this even more powerful reading, thanks for sharing this
Sea
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