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Sick and tired (Contains a swear)

Tired of working jobs for all the corporate pigs
Tired of living in grey soulless 4 wall digs
Tired of faking smiles and saying your alright
Tired of never sleeping and being awake all night

Sick of brain dead idiots acting like their God
Sick of all the countries where human feet have trod
Sick of flesh torn open with nerves exposed and bare
Sick of breathing in all this putrid pungent air

Tired of all the slag’s with baggage
Tired of all the cunts who lie
Tired of watching wars
Tired of seeing people die

Sick of the same old people
Sick of the same old view
Sick of existing
Sick of being with you

Tired of those who follow just like sheep
Tired of those who shed crocodile tears when they weep
Tired of nuclear sunshine and the all drenching rain
Tired of being confined to this human brain

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  • Candyknife gold member
    October 13

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    wow

    very powerful
    i love it, i think (and only a suggestion)
    you should call it "Sick, and Tired"
    love the rawness and how mundane it all sounds like its not only useless its so true its actully become so daily
    excellent work on this really


    • Deathletter
      October 14
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      Thankyou!

      Thankyou Rena! Im so glad you liked it! I will rename it I wrote it during one of my nihilistic moments when i see everything as pointless and shit! lol