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The Zombie Queen

She was always sweet and kind,
strong in spirit, body, mind.
Beloved by everyone she met,
she was so hard to forget.
Though she never courted evil,
she was slightly wild, primeval,
with a real, fatal attraction,
for the darker sides interaction;
with vampires, werewolves she'd hobnob,
always fascinated with the macabre,
skeletons, skulls, the color black,
while others gasped , she just laughed.
“It’s a harmless distraction, not a sign
that I’m being disloyal to my kind.”

So, to me it came as no surprise,
that tho’ she passed, she was still alive,
still a sweetheart , still serene,
chosen to be The Zombie Queen.

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  • sinfull
    October 12
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    OOoo....this should be in the contest yes? It's very good! I knew this same chick in high school. =) best of luck in your contest!


  • Bluemonday silver member
    October 11

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    The Zombie Queen no less...That cant be queen for a day? doesn't that mean she'll be the queen forever ha...Take no notice TM...I'm just being facetious. A really good write with sound rhyme and rhythm mixed with your macabre story..Loved it...Dan


  • lyricist
    October 10
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    wow. again and passionate with your words. and great respect given. now thats unconditional love. excellent piece.


  • arafura gold member
    October 10
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    Excellent writing. Very impressive!


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    October 10
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    Please list all 30 words you used from the word banks (15 from each) in your AN Thanks!


    • toomysterious
      October 10
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      I am sorry I misread the rules, I thought there was a choice between the picture or one of the two word banks. Two early in the morning I guess. Please feel free to remove me from the contest and once again, I apologize.

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