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Hostage


Held captive your fate unknown
Holding in your heart loved ones back home
Hoping and praying to be set free
Hidden faces of your captors who cause this misery
Hit in the stomach you fall to your knees
Horror it grips as a bag is placed over your head
Harrowing feelings knowing soon you’ll be dead

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  • Candyknife gold member
    October 13

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    awesome

    makes me think of people in iraq, but not really the soldiers from here more like the people _they_ catch
    how hypocritical can people be, really ?
    how can you ask for something only to be wrose.. its pathetic and the pigs should burn in hell


    • Deathletter
      October 14
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      Thankyou!

      Im glad you liked it Rena you read this one well! I wrote this about a guy called Ken Bigley who those moronic Muslim terrorists beheaded he was only over there helping to rebuild!
      I second your thoughts!