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A Really Good Team

Is it down to compatibility
of one another's personality
or is it the actuality
to face up to the reality

I'm not looking for the perfect one
Jesus and God are the only two
someone who is close enough to me
is what I search for in you

maybe a similar goal
hopefully a similar dream
a good partner for both
do make a really good team

no gloating in being right
or glorifying them being wrong
it's lifting up each other's weakness
where the other is strong

a true comfort-ship
of an expanded friendship
is a good partnership
of a loving relationship!

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  • So true..and I agree with the statement you made especially in the last stanza..love it..and many thanks for sharing it...a great poetry you did..well done...


    • kyle19
      October 10
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      I am glad that I was able to get my message across! If only what I know now I knew back when I really needed it!

      Thanks for the comment!

      Kyle

  • FallingRainDrop
    October 10

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    aw this is beautiful and i totally agree with the whole thing. "a true comfort-ship" love that line, it just sounds really good! great poem :]

    • kyle19
      October 10
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      Thank you for your lovely comment! I was not sure on how people will take this....good so far and that's cool!

      Thanks again!

      K

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