Damaged I am, somber thoughts to erode,
dilapidate my truculent modus vivendi
Yet there still are parts of me unrelenting,
even grimly sanguine in some unusual way
Days of love, days of ruthless games,
my enclosed and profaned posterior
A calamitous life I alone was responsible for,
so it is as black as that, a life only I made cruel
Darkness thus rides with me, afflicts my soul,
and causes my brain to germinate putrid pus
So the brain swells, blows up to noxious levels,
leaving no room to propagate my ill thoughts
Still the brain feeds my hearts wicked desire,
such to bleed young virgin lust busters
Deadly there be my sting, voracious as I am,
like wolfish in nature, lusting for the entrails
Vehement indulgence, such to eviscerate,
lose myself in the moment of mephitic vapors
Malodorous delights to enthral my defiled mind,
bleeding its sickness, its ominous desire to feed
The viscera within bodies of whores I lust for,
to mutilate and writhe apart, to distort wholly
darkling so be their end, a malevolent sickness,
such insatiable hunger, such a sadistic fiend I am
Imperfect society will say I am, a man so sinister,
a man with some oddities about the fractal brain
Festering matter to cipher, so the skull be flayed,
a peeling away thus the quacks see into my sewer
That day when it comes, a perverse one at that,
what deformities will they find hidden within?
Such to canker sharpened minds no doubt,
a mind virulent, a brain pungent yet remarkable
My moments before then is to desiccate virgins,
to suckle the life blood from, drive the horror home
Whores too I shall welcome into my morbid concave,
my gangrene tainted decorum, such to mislead
A cannibal, corpse lover I am, such I love to gnaw,
such to salivate over, feed upon and dream
The cannibal delectable I am, so love me horrible,
or love me sweet, for I am the cannibal delecable
Author notes
What can I say, I am so mad!
In a list
A contest entry
- WHAT IS IT? by redmoonnrizing by redmoonnrizing.
1800 points, ended October 18, 8 entries
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excellent write you have penned
full of dark gorey imagery
love this stanza..
Darkness thus rides with me, afflicts my soul,
and causes my brain to germinate putrid pus
So the brain swells, blows up to noxious levels,
leaving no room to propagate my ill thoughts
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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Damaged I am, somber thoughts to erode
dilapidate my truculent modus vivendi
Yet there are still parts of me unrelenting
even sanguine in some unusual way
I like this opening stanza very much, really sets the tone for what is a very dark and perverted look into the mind and heart of your Cannibal Delectable. Your use of the word banks is excellent
Dessicating virgins and welcoming whores into your concave of gangrene tainted decorum.
Congrats on the HM, your cannibal is truly delectable in his passion and tastes.
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this poem somehow reminds me of war craft. the literature you used in this poem is very unique.. i have read quite a few gothic poems but very few use this kinda literature.. well i am not saying this is a Gothic poem.
i really liked this write... leaves behind something to ponder about. even i have played around with similar context of this write in one my work also. thats why i know its not easy to write this.
congrats for the green
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I love the dark flavor of this piece!!! The imagery is disgustingly delicious and I think perfectly describes the character of this contest. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!!!
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a freaken horror story
is what this could be
lol i loved it
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well done
excellent use of the word bank
good flow and it does not seemed forced at all
like this stanza..
Darkness thus rides with me, afflicts my soul,
and causes my brain to germinate putrid pus
So the brain swells, blows up to noxious levels,
leaving no room to propagate my ill thoughts
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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A very horrible, dark write indeed. I loved the title. The very idea of "desiccating virgins and lusting after whores creates a dark and perverse image indeed. Great use of the word banks. Good luck in the contest.
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Days of love, days of ruthless games,
- i will tune into this line as i am sat here all whiskied up -all thos days of love, they fuck us up. all those games, playing us lie children, we cry and laugfh our minds away.
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i freaking love this poem i would love to memorize it and quote it throughout the day
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the canible delectable I am..so love me horrible....I will remember that line forever...this is a really chilling write...that you executed with skill, its just so umphy scrumily stark...love it...big time...hugs
T
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