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Abide With Me, played by The Grimethorpe Colliery Band
Please tell me what you think
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Sorry to see I never commented. Watched it a time or two. Speaks to me quite clearly. I do love how the words keep perfect pace with the music. Really well done.
ya All~Ways,
~ Jan ~

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Very beautiful job on this. It was a treat to read it.


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the music and the words were perfect
thank you for sharing this with me
its beautiful

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Thanks for linking me to this. As always I find this tune moving and, for me, a brass band is the only vehicle for this tune.
I also found the words sweet and moving and fit well to the music in both tempo and tone. (Although I might suggest a slight twitch in one of the lines to. "Our two hearts said I will"
I would like to have heard someone actually singing this as, although I tried, my voice is not in the right range for such a piece.
That leads me to the only real criticism of the experience. I was so frustrated at reading a line at a time in such a jerky fashion. I understand what you were trying to do but if I couldn't actually hear the words and music together I would have prefered to read them at my own pace a few times before the music. It is hard to read and re-read a line to savour meaning with a presentation like this. Elegant though it is.
Jim





