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The Girl From The Valley

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Abide With Me, played by The Grimethorpe Colliery Band

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  • Sorry to see I never commented. Watched it a time or two. Speaks to me quite clearly. I do love how the words keep perfect pace with the music. Really well done.

    ya All~Ways,
    ~ Jan ~


  • Tqop
    November 10
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    Very beautiful job on this. It was a treat to read it.


  • raggyann
    October 18

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    the music and the words were perfect
    thank you for sharing this with me
    its beautiful


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    October 11

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    Thanks for linking me to this. As always I find this tune moving and, for me, a brass band is the only vehicle for this tune.
    I also found the words sweet and moving and fit well to the music in both tempo and tone. (Although I might suggest a slight twitch in one of the lines to. "Our two hearts said I will"
    I would like to have heard someone actually singing this as, although I tried, my voice is not in the right range for such a piece.
    That leads me to the only real criticism of the experience. I was so frustrated at reading a line at a time in such a jerky fashion. I understand what you were trying to do but if I couldn't actually hear the words and music together I would have prefered to read them at my own pace a few times before the music. It is hard to read and re-read a line to savour meaning with a presentation like this. Elegant though it is.
    Jim