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For Her Love.

A man sits upon his chair
Lonely, alone him just him
He has nothing and now his story begins.
Running into a girl who takes his breathe away
The eyes he grows to despise always in his dreams
Gone away shes always gone
For her love I'll
Forever Long.

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  • Angel-of-Chaos
    October 11

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    Sad write I can feel the longing and the sadness portrayed in this write. This is an excellent example of unrequited love that leaves one always wondering and wishing. Great write! I really enjoyed this...