She was shattered,
broken,
torn in two.
Bleeding,
Battered,
Falling,
Dying.
She was Happy,
She was sad,
she was ever thing they ever wanted...
I'm sorry,
You fell,
you hit so hard,
I let you down.
You were broken,
held together by ducktape,
shattered again,
and again
I'm sorry,
you must go on like this,
always smiling,
always hurting,
never happy.
I'm sorry,
I'll tape you up again,
piece by little piece,
sitch by sitch,
tape together once more.
I'm sorry,
Battered and bruised,
put away at night.
Smilling clown face,
to be put on when the daylight breaks.
Author notes
I used I'm Sorry for the prompt.
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aww i really liked this
"Battered and bruised,
put away at night.
Smilling clown face,
to be put on when the daylight breaks." i love it overall but liked that stanza the best
keep up the great work! thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you! This is a favorit of mine... in fact I love all my poems about masks and hiding who you are... And I'm glad you enjoyed it too!
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keep it flowing my friend there is a lot more poems in you that i wanna see, and this is just added to the ones i have seen and liked, keep it flowing please.
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Thank you once again DIsturbed. I'm sorry I haven't been on lately but Fanfiction has dicided to rule my life.... Not that I mind, I love writting stories as much as I love poetry though writting Stories is soo much easier.... but anywho thanks again! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and I LOVE hearing your opioion! *Hint Hint to other readers who havent commented
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