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a light in the dark

the irradescent light ,
or the hope that cuts... through the darkness,
like a katana of gods ,
it rains down and reverses all the inflicted pain,
today i live but will i see my light,
or no more than a flicker
of what could be?

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  • xeroabyss II
    October 18

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    And though we often commit to content apathetic acception of the darkness' rule over our world, we still hope for the need for sunglass and tan lotion someday.


  • Ms.spooki
    October 11
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    the gloom is always more comferting...

    • xeroabyss II
      October 18
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      Only when there is another entity there to dwell with you.
      Else, then it is just a hidding spot for none to see the blackholes that have replaced your bright starry eyes.