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Scratching the surface,
Trapped behind the wall,
Afraid to take the chance,
Terrified she’ll fall.
Refracted reflections
Of who he sees,
Running from a truth,
That rips her to her knees.
Too long in shadow,
Hiding from the light,
Won’t enjoy the treasure
He’s offering her tonight.

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Inspired by the quote

"If I say that I'm in pain,
I'm scared that I'll really be in pain.

If I say that I am sad,
I'm scared that I will shed my tears."
- unknown

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