The closer I get to GOD my LORD and Saviour the more the devil tempts me
The more he wants me to fall quickly.. deeply ..be bowing down on my knees to thee ..
Yeah i im aware I used his name in small text and GOD.. LORD.. in Caps
Theres a damn good reason for that ...he so deserves to be belittled ..diminshed put simply.
You see he is in me and I darent give in ..completley
Tuant me to be sinning.. winning souls on the way to take down to hades with me ..
I will take you if you let me .... directly no stops express delivery.
Taking chances with answers that come simply ..to capture me by giving all I ask
he delivers but always with a catch trying to snatch me back
Im not joking and no readers im not high smoking ..crack cocaine
Insane or going down the drain just yetIm standing firm on this one with a bible as my gun and its loaded 7.62 aim at you satan .
There a battle going on inside of me every night and day
And I know the time is coming when the battle will be an outright War
Thats not hear say.. it is for sure ...beleive me .
I ve beeen down that road before ..and ive learned to roll with the punches and karate kicks.. broken hips ,split lips coughing up shit for weeks , days and nights with bleek sights before me , crying behind the lines for my mother and brothers to back me
rub my back ..inject me with indecenycy.. take me out of my pain and misery , you have no idea i swear it hurts me , alerts me to the impending fear
Broken bottles and killer holds but im older now by a year and a hundred score shows in scars so clearly see it there and one or two here .
666 ...take this.. try that ..cool isnt it , oh shes so hot and dandy fancy some of that cant get enough of it , debortuary . ..even in the mortuary.. makin bacon with a face of satans glee , trying to cripple me.. keep me to himself , he wants the converted diverted , to pervisity.. filth and gluteny.. puts his hand on me in my heart and at times i stumble and fall for his trickery.. hey im not perfect believe me im just starting on GODS path and its hard to change the past,,, but a few hold my hand and guide me when its necessary Praise the LORD and my other half.
I pray everday and I know theres an ANGEL by my side here to provide a better way to survive and without her i would surly die a lesser soul than I am today ..a fighter looking for the right way to end the battle inside ..I cant run and hide ouldnt anyway .. this one is war that I Am going to win with me going all the way home to the Promised land.. to be contiuned for sure. amen and you satan.. go to hell
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I shall commend you on the strength of this write, as I dont really go into the whole god thing as a rule. I believe you wrote this with your heart in the right place. I dont think you were evil, but if you say so. anyway, thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, and I wish you all the best.
love,
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' by my side she hes to provide ' last paragraph I think you have gender bender going on there
..apart from that, it's a strong write, doubt we can vanquish all our devils, even Jesus only managed to do it once, a good one but still the little demons are always there 
C
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We could look back throughout history or turn the t.v on and see that evil is indeed alive and well.
we tend to want to battle it but it is us we are battling with any way we look at it. we are all good and evil, but we choose.
You have good within you, you have God within you, utilize this gift,
with each thought, each word, each action should be good, when it is hateful evil thoughts, you are utilizing evil, and it will grow.
it is best to know yourself, know why you react and you see the same thing in othesr.
this is not to fight just to notice, to be aware of why you react
we say In God we trust but then do we, the smallest thing that bothers us we react.
trust in God and be still
this is Faith
your write pulled at my heart
I pray that God who you love so much will guide you and protect you and keep you safe mind, body and soul
God bless you my friend...
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well said Glenn for there is so many things in our path that stop our walk with the Lord.. anything that consumes us more and more. and their is always an Angel by your side hugs always Angel♥
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Victory is Your Glenn Shannon!!!
We all fight with our own form of demons, tempted by the world.
Thank God for Family and Friends that are here to help us along our way!
Great write, thank you for writing and posting.
Yes Victory in Jesus Glenn Shannon!!!
Cyber Hugs and Blessings!!
Cheryl
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Satan will only dwell if you let him
God can wave a hand and calm the sea
He can Heal us on a whim
He done it for others, He can do it for me
Nice work..the battle of self..faith..
Life..
Love to you
Passionspromise
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