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Wishes

Have you ever wished for
a
Husband
a
Friend
a
House
a
Car
Money
then
You were
Blessed
withall
you asked for
but you
stil felt
Empty

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  • thesefadingstars.
    October 10

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    well, not really. but kind of.
    the empty part- most definately.

    the ending is amazing and powerful and brilliant
    i love it
    it's simple but strong.


  • Nataja Wells
    October 9
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    Shero!!!!!!!!!!!!!!