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Vergessenen Kinder

Do you believe in the Vergessenen Kinder?
Did you know they are everywhere?
Did you know they cry for help?
Did you know that you hate them?
Did you know you reject them?
Did you know that I'm one of them?
Do you ever take time to think of their feelings?
Do you even know what they are?
We are the Forgotten Children.
We are the Vergessenen Kinder
We are...Emo Kids.

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  • Sarahbear09
    October 10

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    Wow, this is powerful. I, for one, do not hate you or anyone like you. I don't believe in judging people in groups, I would rather judge them based on themselves. I like the phrase "Forgotten Children" a lot. Maybe take one of the "you"s in lines 4 or 5 and change it to something like "the world" or something, just to change it up a bit. Once again, like always, nice write. It makes you stop and think about everything and the stereotypes out there in the world.