My form fits
breath escapes
lips....
Many things I wish
to say -
yes
and steam
slips....
into me
Miss this and that
and you
each day.
Wanted him
to love me
(eros forbidden)
yes
and as
the rest
roll...
away
Reminds me
that he said
he would not.
Stupid girl.
Author notes
I am not pleased with this, but I'm tired.
I request your most honest statements.
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This heartbreakingly tiny...the pain behind it is so strong you are trying to cover it up and douse it ..but these fragments escaped.
I guess their is a massive story behind this
it will appear in diverse poems of yours for years.
(the last four lines brought tears to my eyes)
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re-reading it, a little happier with it, but there's still something wrong/missing I can't quite put my finger on
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