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My forever

I knew then
Somehow
I just knew

Fated

I saved
Your name
I saved
Your words

I saved up
For
Forever

Soon

Very soon

It will be
Time

I watch
The days pass
With a quite
Knowing

Wishing
Only
To slip
Through
The portal
Of time
To steal
A kiss

From my
Forever

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3) Write about someone you want to be with, but cannot for whatever reason.

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  • codsta
    October 12
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    Very good! Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

  • Just4u
    October 10

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    I wonder which is really the stronger emotion...longing or loving...
    Perhaps they are just...equal opposites...
    Each in turn disappearing as the other appears

    Hugs...Eddy