she's ripping me to
peices but she knows that this
won't make him love her.
Author notes
title anyone?
i could only think of cliche'd ones.
Prompt:
1. Write about a pink flower. (or from that flower's point of view)
"he loves me; he loves me not"
-- girls still seem to do this, even though they know it won't help.
A contest entry
- Because I have points I need to give away by zhaniswolf.
700 points, ended October 23, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
i cannot give ahaiku comment for this....it has to be twice the size of the poem...competition can rip..but she cannot if you do not take it as such..beleive me she will be ripped.....and what is common love doing..where is he bent to..if not you..better move on.....super haiku dearest -
who cares if the title is cliche? The lines underneath were great! Very original (in my opinion) Thank you for entering and good luck.
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