Thick hot fudge sauce
creamy caramel
melted marshmallows
crushed salty nuts
smooth delicious peanut butter
all piled over vanilla ice-cream,
topped with a fat, red, juicy cherry!
(oh - and smothered with whipped-cream!)
superfluous
especially after eating
yummy cheese and pepperoni pizza
double chocolate brownies
luscious lemon cake
with cream cheese icing;
last but not least,
crunchy apple crisp.
I really did not need a sundae for dessert!!
Author notes
lst thing I thought of.....lol......just had a 'tea party' with friends, and we all try to out-do ourselves with the desserts....yummy 
prompt: superfluous
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Indeed!
Love the word and all the goodies. I was about to ask if you got a hold of some old school reefer or something. Sure sounded like the munchies to me. LOL I am glad that I am on my way to a birthday party just now or I would be upset because you have given me the grum-bellies and I need something sweet this instant! LOL Great!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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lol - never tried the old school reefer. As I am so much older now, I look back sometimes (rarely) and wonder why I didn't at least try it.....lolol...
No, we gals get the munchies a lot - and our get-togethers reflect that! (and for a few - so does the weight!
Hope you had some great munchies at your party!
thank you so much for reading and commenting poetryality - I appreciate it.
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OMG I'm hungry now!!! lol
Great write.. hehe.. food easily comes to my mind too
lol
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Making me hungry you are....your descriptive imagery is excellent here... I wish you well in the contest!
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LOL you have got me taste buds dripping
The appitite you have given also makes me want to dash off and eat
that sundae
Brilliant hun
Best wishes
Julie x
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lol - thanks Julie - glad you 'enjoyed'. A virtual sundae is all I want right now - too cold here to think of ice cream!!!
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Now you made me want to eat.
Well done, very descriptive.
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thank you so much for reading and commenting February Moon - glad you 'enjoyed' this....lol
best wishes
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Geez, there goes the diet, you have the reader fall into this with your title, try to avoid that...lol, sounds real good and now all you ladies at the tea party have to have a exercise party, or take a walk. Decriptive, leaves to the imagination or to the realization. Bon' Apetite'. Excellent. Blessings.
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thank you Denerica - glad you 'enjoyed'....lol
I have GREAT genetics and so do two of the other girls. We figure we'd better eat like this - while we can...
blessings
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I haven't eaten dinner yet, and now I want...THAT! yum!!!
Very nicely done, now my mouth is watering! lol
~ Tim
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lol - thank you so much Xianaria for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
this is scheduled for 'file 13'......it was all my poor mind could think of at this moment.....sheesh!
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Your prompt is 15. superfluous.
Good luck!
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