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Elixir of Fortitude

Packaged in thin laced tape, fitting to be more than snug
Legs left out on a warm winter day shipping off on watery roads.

Polished eyes rimmed by glitter watch a phenomenon called time;
Which has become fickle,
for you could swear you left ten minuets ago.

Your mind now swarming in pure felicity,
sending fiery sparks down your veins.

This ecstatic fluid rips through you
as your heart flutters nearer to a goal you have just begun
on recent accounts, to exhausting for your peculiar passions to explain.

So, dear debutante don’t be afraid- it's time

       
                  Now,


Enter this world.














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  • Heroesrox
    October 10
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    Wowies. I see it just fine, dear and this is really good. I thank you for taking the time to enter and for using the prompt in the great way that you did. Best wishes to you! Thanks again.

    Good luck!

  • Heroesrox
    October 9

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    Okies. Your prompt is 17. debutante.

    Good luck with it!