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It's a Story...




it's a story of a hurricane taking man far from his home
hurt and fear deep inside of you and me.

it'a a story of a lovely scene
when there was still a bit of hope
and when the dew sprang up from the heart of a flower
when the bee danced bringing honey to the magic castle

It' a story of a sweet song
when birds twittered still
leaving a perfumed universe,

In all of a sudden, we have
no time to sigh
or even to weep

when breeze blew to make nature a real paradise.

and now it's my story,
since my birth till the present day
I will switch on candles to remember my best memories
I'm celeberating the birthday of my old past all alone

it's a story of my loneliness,
pain and fear through an aching  hurricane..

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