Death stalks
These pines
At every turn
Hidden deep
With rain
Drenched
Fern
By rivers
Edge
She lay
There
Sleeping
Highway
Markers
For the
Weeping
Like Autuems
Blanket of
Colored hue
Death
Settled in
Like the
Mourning
Dew
Why is
There such
A place
As this
Where
Earth and
Rock await
Deaths
Kiss
Comments
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excellent imagery
Your words create a very dark atmosphere for the reader.
Each stanza provides very strong images and emotions making it easy to visualize what has taken place.
Jeannette
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