Hold me tight,
Don't leave me tonight.
Your arms around me,
You hold my heart's key.
Broken and falling,
Your name i keep calling.
I loved you so much,
You made me warm to the touch.
Then you walked away,
The sky's slowly turned grey.
I fell to the floor,
All you did was ignore.
All i can do know is remember,
That cold night in November.
"Hold me tight,
Dont leave me tonight."
The words you said,
To stop the dread.
I couldn't help but do as you asked,
Your intentions were so masked.
Hold me tight,
Dont leave me tonight.
Is that what you say to every girl?
Before you break their hearts?
Is that how it starts?
"Hold me tight,
Dont leave me tonight."?
Author notes
okzz so this is my first new write in awhile hope you like it:]
A contest entry
- depressing or love poems. by SiC.
500 points, ended October 16, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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heartfelt
very melancholic and emotional poetry, after joining this site yesterday, i havent really found many poems that i could relate to, i like the way you wrote these last lines, how you wrote it as a question
"Is that what you say to every girl?
Before you break their hearts?
Is that how it starts?
"Hold me tight,
Dont leave me tonight."?"
i also found it very easy to understand your meaning and expression
i believe it is a heartfelt also that it is so plain to read, partly because it flows well, partly because its easy to relate to and parly because it's not hard to comprehend. -
omg!
steff who is he? i'll kick his ass! u know ill do it!!!!!!!!
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