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Handcuffs and Rose Thorns

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Mystress,
please bleed my
soul with handcuffs
and rose thorns.

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  • longhorns-fan
    December 14, 2009

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    This is short, but it is also very strong and deep, and it gets the point across. It's amazing how so few words can say so much. Great write.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    October 19, 2009

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    Very well done, love the word choice here..But I have to ask about the spelling of Mystress...I know it spelled as Mistress..is there a significant reason for the alternate spelling.?

    **Master Ktulu**


    • DrkPoet silver member
      October 20, 2009
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      Yes actually there is a reason for the spelling as it is, for Mysterious, Mystical, etc. I write all my poems for Her with that spelling because She is, thanks for asking!! And also thanks for the gold


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 10, 2009
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    mmm, sounds like a grand wish that needs to be granted.
    Best of luck to you with this.


  • Edie gold member
    October 10, 2009
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    Ah...I like your take on the prompt!


  • Stormy Sky
    October 9, 2009

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    I like it. Short, sweet, to the point and darkly beautiful. Not sure if you spelled Mystress that way on purpose or not, but it's a nice effect, what with the "my" part in it. Really emphasizes the belonging quality of the speaker. Brilliant job, sweety.

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