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Aurgh Mom

Aurgh Mom!
Where is she right now
Nowhere to be found
DANG my carrots are floor bound!
OOPS there goes my spoon
As it went sailing across the room
Aurgh Mom!
I can't reach my peach!
In a language babies only speak
AURGH MOM!!!!
Throwing up my hands sighing
For I have reached my peak
Leaning on the wall is the broom
Whispering there lies lunch yet once again

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  • OldBear34 silver member
    October 12
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    Inconsistent Rhyme

    A workable idea, but rhyming is required,