Stare into the eyes of a madman
One who held she who he lost
A crime and travesty unbiased
The night she cried no tears flowed
I still remeber her last words
learning I live in my past
A comfort of my own
Yet everytime I open that door I die
Reaching out for her hand one last time before ....
I awaken
A contest entry
- Everyone Welcome! For every 20 poems entered, I'll add 400 more points :) (Not enough entries so I'm extending it until October 10th) by ChrissyJean.
1843 points, ended November 7, 48 entries
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Comments
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Different, and dwelling in the past is never good
On the wings of misguidance
Keep penning!
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asshole .
shits good , you should write more >.>
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This is a really strong and emotive write..nice flow..nice mellancholy ambiance
Bravo
T
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What quote did you use?
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Wow this was very moving and very enjoyable too read. Had a awsome flow too it. I hope that you did good in your contest. Anyways. keep up the good work.
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Great job on this! I enjoyed reading it.
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