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Road to Adulthood

A milestone.
An adventure that begins
Like a plunge from a cliff.

A war inside your head
As nothing goes according to plan.

A rocky start
To a teetering end.

Beside myself
Swaying too and fro
In the winds of life
Unravelling a tale yet untold.

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Prompt: 6. Prepubescent

A contest entry

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  • Heroesrox
    October 9

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    Very good take on the prompt. I like the last parts the most. Awesome work.

    Thank you so much for taking the prompt the way you did and for entering the contest! Best of luck to you!


    • codsta
      October 9
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      Thanks! It wasn't as hard as I thought after all.


  • Heroesrox
    October 9
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    Your prompt is 6. Prepubescent

    Good luck!


    • codsta
      October 9
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      Oooh that one might be tough! Thanks for the challenge.