Pulsation,
repetition, but diffrent in the atmosphere.
Send out, ship off, from cramped spaces, into the void.
One small antenna, a beacon among flashlights.
Just hit Andromeda, heading for Orion's Belt.
Static absorbs, celestial bodies bounce, this one emission.
Faster, it flies, greater the speed, further the source.
When prime-time reaches the speed of light.
In some distant place, we may never see.
Aliens are catching the second season of Lost.
A contest entry
- My Favorite Words-- Prompt by Heroesrox.
550 points, ended October 17, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congratulations on a Golden Bronze!
Loss never sounded so exciting.
Love
Myra
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thanks, I was surprised to win.
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It's really cool because at first you're talking about these wonderful, mind-blowing, majestic things. Then, at the end you make it seem so casual, normal. Really great write. You made me laugh.
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thank you. glad you enjoyed.
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Wonderful take on the prompt.
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Thanks! I felt kina light-hearted and I wanted to end with a memorable line. Glad you liked it.
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The last line is funny as hell and it was totally a surprise!!!
I love pieces that do that. Awesome work with the prompt. Thanks for enterign and good luck to you!
♥
Mike
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good, i'm glad you liked it. i wanted it to be funny somewhere too! thanks.
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this is an awesome take on the prompt dear bro .. love the way you took this write well done hun always hugs Angel♥
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thanks sis, it was short, but I liked it!
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10. Emission is your prompt!
Good luck with it. ♥
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