Volcanic release to retire my stress
coarse stone rubbing over me
of tired and dead feet
Skin hitting the floor
another layer of scars gone
awaiting new growth
Volcanic release to retire my stress
coarse stone rubbing over me
of a tired and dead soul
Emotions hitting the floor
another layer of scars gone
awaiting new growth
Author notes
Word prompt - Pumice
20-100 words limit.
Word count - 57
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Pumice
My mind is on other things. Sorry Mike!
A contest entry
- My Favorite Words-- Prompt by Heroesrox.
550 points, ended October 17, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest...
Comments
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Pumice is awesome!!! !!
Very dark, yet with a hint of hope between the lines
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wow I can feel the power in this piece it is very visual and stimulates the imagination of great power an excellent write dear poet
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I really like what you have here, but to me, it seems like just a beginning. It is very good, though.
After my contest is over, and your mind is at ease, please do me a favor and add a few more verses to this and then send me the link.
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Thanks hun. I can try to do that for you. I might add more to it before you judge it. I'll let you know if I do...Thanks again and once again, happy birthday. Now go celebrate it...
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21. Pumice
Good luck!
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