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Lovers, to Friends, to Nothing(Not finished)

Congratulations
You now see me for a lie
I lost my will
But not the patience

I'm not a doctor
So I dont think that
I can help you anymore
The way I used to

You left the storm
Just when the lightning was getting closer
And I watched the rain
Outside my door

I never said
That I don trust you anymore
I tried to tell you
It's just not in the same way
Like when we were lovers

[pre chorus]
It wasn't what was under  the covers
It was the feeling of not breathing
And feelin' fine

And my love traveled
From you o another
The day the past
Became another lie

[chorus]
To you, I'm a liar
Now that I'm livin' life higher
While you're lost below the ground

You're pointin' your finger
Well, look in the mirror
Your anger has no sound

You're wantin' to blame me
For makin' you crazy
But it seems as If I wasn't even there

[verse 2]
You're sadly mistaken
But i'm not claimin' innocence
And its not the first time
You said you couldn't take it

Thank god for last lines
The ones that break under your feet
You bring me down
But I will never learn defeat

[pre chorus]
It wasn't what was under  the covers
It was the feeling of not breathing
And feelin' fine

And my love traveled
From you o another
The day the past
Became another lie

[chorus]
To you, I'm a liar
Now that I'm livin' life higher
While you're lost below the ground

You're pointin' your finger
Well, look in the mirror
Your anger has no sound

You're wantin' to blame me
For makin' you crazy
But it seems as If I wasn't even there

[bridge]
Trust is a game
That don't end quite the same
When love takes a step down
From whence it first came

Trus is just a game
Shouldn't end with so much shame
In past decisions
Resting with the questioning to blame

[chorus]
To you, I'm a liar
Now that I'm livin' life higher
While you're lost below the ground

You're pointin' your finger
Well, look in the mirror
Your anger has no sound

You're wantin' to blame me
For makin' you crazy
But it seems as If I wasn't even there

Author notes

Okay. Now Im done. If I could get some good feedback on the bridge, it'd really help. I wanted to say something that would really make people think.

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  • AllOverItNow
    October 9
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    Interesting perspective..written from the other side of the coin. It's refreshing, I enjoyed it