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Hopebama for Peace

Hope: apparently means standing around.
Hope: apparently means having money.
Hope: apparently means you don’t have to lift a finger and everything will magically fall in place.

Hope: is supposed to mean change.

Hope: has never changed anything without action.
Hope: has never accepted anything without first having done something.
Hope: has never seen this kind of progress before.

Hope: has always been about the sunrise.
Hope: has always been about holding out for the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
Hope: has always been  about making it through when all odds were against you.

Hope: is supposed to mean peace.

Hope: has never meant an ongoing war.
Hope: has never meant red versus blue.
Hope: has never asked for anything in return.

Is there any chance for hope if there is little left to hope for?

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  • I really like it, it is good, since you want constructive ctiricism you could try using some imagery,GREAT JOB