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Like Ghosts

The expectations settle on me,
wispy chains that are weak to my resistance.

They remind me of what I will lose,
in order to preserve my flight to freedom.

They break like empty promises, and float off like ghosts.

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  • Cherrylv
    October 10
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    This poem may only be a few lines long but it says so much. Well written, good luck in the contest

    Cherry xxx


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 9
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    Oh very well done!
    A fine, strong piece this is!
    Thank you for sharing and for being part of the contest; all the very best to you!!!