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A Bucket or a Spoon

When they lay me down, all too soon,
and measure how I loved my fellow man,
will they bring a bucket or a spoon?

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 25
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    oh my dear friend,
    I am sure they will bring more than a bucket!!
    you are pricelesssss
    love and blessings
    Rend

  • I would imagine they will need an army of bulldozers!
    This is a powerful poem in brevity dear and sure makes
    the reader look inward to their own self.

    I wish you much luck in this contest, it appears to me that you have
    written a winner here. Excellent write hun.

    Suzi


  • tara wilson gold member
    October 9
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    aw, a bucket, i am sure... i love this..


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 9

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    Oh profound!
    I think most everyone would hope that they would bring a bucket or even a truck!
    I very much enjoyed this!
    Thank you for sharing!