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Race For The Chase

Cars go round and round
as the crowd cheers
last lap too soon arrives
ending the race
another Sunday gone
the year has just begun.

Only ends when winner takes all
others left in the dust
while another comes close
to taking it all away
lap by lap the race come to an end
another year is done.

please give me constructive criticism

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