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Inside The Eyes Shows The Soul

nothing inside or out
no faith, hope, even love
filled only with despair
with a dead cold stare

yet some manage
to survive
thrive on hate
seems like fate

won't see it coming
like thief with a key
it won't, can't just let you be
you'll never be free trapped for all eternity

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