paint the sky with me
a pure opal pearl color
with an iridescent shimmer
the reflections of our sky
glimmering in your eyes
such a beautiful moment
tainted
every word we utter
maimed
twisted
distorted
like the phantom of the opera
but we have no more songs
no more melodies fall in time
and certainly no second act
with no understudies to take our place
it is curtain call for us
no encore to reanimate our hearts
silence
Author notes
"wipe away the clouds.hidden in your eyes. close your mouth. and stop the river of lies."
i'm your christine <3 i do love you, thanks for a second chance <3<3
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i like the take on the prompt. i love phantom of the opera and i love how you incorperated that so well. everything flowed beautifully
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awh thank you ^^
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Very beautiful write love but who is Christine? lol
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the lass who the phantom loves... you said you liked it... lol
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WOW!!! What a read this one is! I love it! You really did great with this one! I love that opening line........
"paint the sky with me
a pure opal pearl color
with an iridescent shimmer"
That paints a wonderful picture for me! Dont ask why.......
but....... oh hell... why not, Opal is my favorite stone, and
well I have a few, and well waiting for yet another
Great job!!!
Best of luck in this contest!!!
and love
Mom
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^_^ thanks mom!!
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