alcohol to dull the pain
drugs to stimulate the brain
other half to fill the void
but in end it's all destroyed
fragile meetings intertwined
like stepping through a field of mines
on only self you can depend
for time does change those come/go friends
what is this seeking in our soul
a fluttering from goal to goal
with only temporary mends
for depression comes yet once again
weather changing patterns crush
taking what was new and lush
as snow descends now on this day
I wish it would just go away
-eddy
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Thoughts on a snowy day makes the soul think a winter of discontent has begun...Reflective, sobering thoughts presented...we all have them from time to time...Appreciate your thoughts...expressing your humanity.. Well done!
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Do you have snow already?! Here wasn't for the colours of the leaves I'd say we were at early Spring
Even the weather likes some diversity, so don't be sad, just enjoy the white flocks
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Interesting, that first verse, a good opening. The fact that we are all suffering/searchiing/in the same boat, says to me that we are all from the same root and all heading in the same direction. I liked this poem, made me think about the reasons we are alive
david
last line of the first verse, how about - ''In the end it's all destroyed''.
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depression SUCKS
A well balanced rhyme
Of the reality of time
As we cross that bridge
Beneath that valleys ridge
Of snow and rain
& back again. lol
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Butttt........
Soon will be spring and hope like spring ...springs eternal ...Therefore it does not matter how many times you have tried and failed because tomorrow the same trail will look new again and well , what can you do but laugh and go ...Storm
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