Shifting, without effort
the thought sifts through
fingers.
This is in your gasp;
fight or let it linger?
Let the opportunity hesitate
(tongue held mid-sentence).
"Yes, yes. Go pack. Pick it all up
in hopes of what you leave behind
can do the same."
"Of all people! -You-
step on the pedestal? I.."
"Don't forget your coat;
it gets awfully cold at night."
This is love attempting indifference.
Author notes
After a couple hours of writing, I combined the bits of stanzas and dialogue (from a different story I was writing) and put them together in this. There will be more.
Comments
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This was a nicely written piece of work you have here. I found this really enjoyable too read. ALl the stanza's were awsome. Keep up the good work.
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i wonder which quote goes where. i can't decipher this one.
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