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Go on/Give up.

The bloods seeping from my veins, the pain barly a sting,
My arms are numb, my heart is beating, yet I still dont feel alive.

What is this pain I feel inside, why do these thoughts fill my head,
Is it possible to get away, will another cut save me from this pain?

Will I cclose my eeys, and never awake, can anyone save me from myself,
or should I just keep smiling as if nothings wrong..?

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 23

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    This was full of emotions and very powerful. It was well written. Really enjoyable to read. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!


  • Coloured Skies
    October 9

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    Very powerful on the emotions Chels. I feel sorry for you! I'm sorry you're having to deal with so much pain you're going through right now, I can really relate to every stanza in this poem and know EXACTLY how you feel. It feels as if everyday is another wasted I guess I hope you keep your head held high though and stay strong for me!